My last trip on last weekend. I go to attend a wedding of college classmate. This is impressive for me. Because I meet a lot of old friends. we haven't seen about two years. I miss them very much. On this wedding we see the import moment of my class mate'life. and we share a lot of our life after generat.
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My last trip was last weekend. I attended the wedding of a college classmate.
This was great for me because I met a lot of old friends. We haven't seen each other for
about two years. I miss them very much. At the wedding we saw the most import moment of my classmates life. [and we share a lot of our life after generat.](?)
I'm not sure what you mean in the last sentence, sorry.
Otherwise good job. There were a couple of times where you used the present tense, but you should have used the past (see/saw, attend/attended).
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