Karasu
Is this sentence natural English?

"The more the gap between reason and instinct is widening, the more his personality is distorted"

This is the literary expression for a two-faced man.
Could you check if this is natural English, and please advise if there is better expression for this sentence!

2019年5月8日 13:04
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"The more the gap between reason and instinct is widened, the more his personality is distorted"

Great sentence.

DISTORTED is indicative.
For consistency, WIDENED should be indicative too.

Good job!
2019年5月8日