ENGLISH GRAMMAR He's upset because he haven't been approved on the exam. After knew it, he got even more upset by measuring himself up with the number one student of his class.Is this sentence grammar

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Samuel Rodrigues

ENGLISH GRAMMAR

He's upset because he haven't been approved on the exam. After knew it, he got even more upset by measuring himself up with the number one student of his class.

Is this sentence grammarly OK?

Please, point my mistakes out just in case you have found one.

2020年8月18日 20:32

留言 · 3

Sam ~ You can probably express this in a more concise manner ~ something like this might work without changing the essential meaning:

"He's upset because initially he was not approved on the exam, and subsequently, he chose to measure his performance against the performance of the best student in the class."

2020年8月18日

Hey, your sentence isn't grammatically correct. That's ok though, try your best.

You could say the following instead:

He's upset because he didn't pass the exam. After finding out, he got even more upset when he compared his grade to that of the number one (or top) student in his class.

2020年8月18日