白雪纷飞何时了  When will the snow  stop?
红梅点点随风笑  Wintersweets are smiling in the wind.
银装素裹独自开  They are blooming in the white world.
暗香悄把春来报  Secret fragrance said softly quietly that the spring will be coming.

Since I can edit your entry,  It is better for me to comment here to get around the length restriction.

Your version is so much more upbeat and more optimistic than mine!

白雪纷飞何时了  When will the snow  stop? Excellent!
红梅点点随风笑  Wintersweets Red plum blossoms are smiling in the wind.
银装素裹独自开  They are Blooming in the a white world of white, [This sounds more poetic in English]
暗香悄把春来报  Their secret fragrance said softly quietly whispering that the spring will is be coming.

Excellent in translation in getthing through the meaning of the poem into English.  However, this way does not help those trying to learn either language.  Compare this style to one that does,

White snowflakes fluttering... When will they end?

Red plum blossoms dotting... Smiling with the wind.

Blooming by themselves in a blanket of white,

Faint fragrance quietly reporting the coming of spring.

This sort of translation preserve the original structure.  For example, White snowflakes flying vs red plum flowers blooming.  "When will they end?" with "smiling with the wind".

Both methods have their pros and cons. - Jeff