The beauty of your eyes
When I look at the ocean, I see the blue, when I look at the trees, I see the green, but when I look at your eyes, I see the color of my dreams.
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The Beauty of your Eyes
When I look at the ocean, I see the its blueness.Upon when I look at the trees, I see the greenness of them.
But when I look at into the limpid pools of your eyes, I see the color of my dreams.
Very beautiful poem but needed more poetic language.
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The beauty of your eyes
When I look at the ocean, I see the blue. When I look at the trees, I see the green. But when I look at your eyes, I see the color of my dreams.
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