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Elena
I love music
My favorite artist is L'Arc~en~Ciel.I've gone to their concert three times. The songs very amazing. All members compose songs and write lyrics.
I like Shiina Ringo. Her view of the world is unique.
I listen to Avril Lavigne recently.
I use Apple Music. I can try many kinds of music by the service.
What kind of music do you like?
2020年3月10日 04:03
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Hello Elena, I have corrected your work. very well done. I hope this helps you out.
I love music
My favorite artist is L'Arc~en~Ciel. I've gone to their concert(s) three times. The songs (are) very amazing. All members compose (the) songs and write (the) lyrics.
I like Shiina Ringo. Her view of the world is unique.
I listen(ed) to Avril Lavigne recently.
I use Apple Music. I can try many kinds of music <s>by</s> uising the service.
What kind of music do you like?
2020年3月10日
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I love music.
My favourite artist is L'Arc~en~Ciel. I've gone to their concert three times. Their songs are very amazing. All of the members compose their own songs and write lyrics.
I like Shiina Ringo. Her view of the world is unique.
I also listened to Avril Lavigne recently.
I use Apple Music. I can <s>try</s> listen to many kinds of music <s>by</s> using their service.
What kind of music do you like?
Please note, British spelling is favourite, American spelling is favorite. So both are correct depending on what English you want to type in. Well done!
2020年3月10日
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