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My homework - letter
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad to get it again. Sorry, I haven't written for so long . I have been busy with my studies.
In your letter you asked me about excursion. I like excursion very much! It helps me to know something about new places, buildings, museums. I think, an excursion can spoil a guide, who speaks very quiet and not interesting. My last excursion, wich I visited, was 1 year ago. I went to the Peter and Paul fortress. It was so exciting.
Sorry, I have to go. Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Nastya
2020年3月16日 11:54
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My homework - letter
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad to <s>get it again</s> hear from you again. Sorry<s>,</s> I haven't written <s>for so long</s> in a very long time. I have been busy with my studies.
In your letter you asked me about excursionS. I like excursionS very much! They <s>It</s> help<s>s</s> me <s>to know</s> find out <s>something</s> things about new places, buildings<s>,</s> <s>and </s>museums. I think, an excursion can <s>spoil</s> be spoiled by a guide<s>,</s> who speaks very quiet and not interestingLY. <s>My</s> The last excursion, <s>wich </s><s>(which)</s><s> I visited</s> I did was 1 year ago. I went to the Peter and Paul fortress. It was so exciting.
Sorry, I have to go. <s>Write back soon</s>. Looking forward to hear from you again.
Best wishes,
Nastya
2020年3月16日
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My homework - letter
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I'm glad to hear from you<s>get it</s> again. Sorry, I haven't written for so long. I have been busy with my studies.
In your letter you asked me about my excursion. I liked my excursion very much! It helped me to get to know something about new places, buildings, and museums. I think, an excursion can be spoiled by a guide, who speaks very quietly and is not very interesting. My last excursion, <s>which</s><s> I visited</s>, that I went on was 1 year ago. I went to the Peter and Paul fortress. It was so exciting.
Sorry, I have to go. Write back soon.
Best wishes,
Nastya
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2020年3月16日
An excursion is to describe an 'outing' or a trip...we generally only use this word when going out as a group, for example with a school or university group. Maybe a better word would be simply 'a trip' or 'sightseeing' or 'travelling'. When using the word excursion, we say that we 'go on an excursion' or 'went on an excursion'.. you do not 'visit an excursion'- visit would be used as ..to visit a place, a city, a monument. :)
2020年3月16日
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