Pedro Rogick
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I'm writing a text to the PET (Preliminary English Test exam). Will you help me? Dear Mrs. Lake When you come up with having a party to celebrate the end of the school year, I had been so excited! It would be a great way to finish our days together with a flourish. However, in my opinion, we have to hang out in a different place, not at school. We should go to the park! There is a large green area so we could use it to play soccer, volleyball and videogames. If we had a party in the summer, our foods and drinks should be fresh and delicious. So, I think ice cream and juice would be a good shot! Thanks, Mrs. Lake. See you soon!
2020年4月19日 18:25
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I'm writing a text to the PET (Preliminary English Test exam). Will you help me?

Dear Mrs. Lake

When you <s>come</s><s> </s>came up with having a party to celebrate the end of the school year, I <s>had been</s>was so excited! It would be a great way to finish our days together <em>with a flourish. (A bit strange here)</em>

However, in my opinion, we have to hang out in a different place, not at school. We should go to the park! There is a large green area so we could use it to play soccer, volleyball and video games.

If we <s>had</s>have a party in the summer, our food<s>s</s> and drink<s>s</s> should be fresh and delicious. So, I think ice cream and juice would be <em>a good shot! (A good shot is another way of saying a way to be - here it's a bit strange)</em>

Thanks, Mrs. Lake. See you soon!
2020年4月19日
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