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More and more people wear fashionable clothes. Is this positive or negative development?
More and more people wear fashionable clothes. Is this positive or negative development?
As globalization advances, people are easy to adapt to new trends. I believe wearing fashionable clothes is positive development for three main reasons.
To begin with, wearing fashionable clothes can be one of the ways to love themselves. People can express themselves by wearing fashionable clothes which makes people build their confidence. Also, it helps people stay fit and healthy. A lot of people consider fashion is really important because these days more an image conscious society compared to the past. So people make plenty of efforts on staying their body fit and healthy to wear fashionable clothes as well as it could be connected to loving their body.
Secondly, As most people tend to judge others by looks, it can be one of the ways to show their identity and personality. For example, if a person wore very unique clothes, people could guess that person would seek their own fashion. In another case, if a person wore very trendy clothes, people could guess that person is really sensitive to the trend.
Wearing more and more fashionable attire would lead to development in fashion industries ranging from apparel to accessories which can give a huge impact on a global economy. In addition, this can become a career option for young people, since there would be a lot of growth opportunities. For instance, in a recent study it was found that the increasing demand of glamorous clothes in the recent past, has consequently provided employment to thousands of fashion graduates across nations.
In conclusion, according to me, it is clear that wearing fashionable clothes has become a positive way to love and show them selves as well as gives a positive effect on a global economy.
2020年5月11日 02:16
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More and more people wear fashionable clothes. Is this positive or negative development?
More and more people are wearing fashionable clothes. Is this positive or negative development?
As globalization advances, people adapt easily to new trends. I believe wearing fashionable clothes is a positive development for three main reasons.
To begin with, wearing fashionable clothes can be one of the ways that people can love themselves. People can express themselves by wearing fashionable clothes which builds their confidence. Also, it helps people stay fit and healthy. A lot of people consider that fashion is really important, because people today are more image conscious than people in the past. So people make plenty of effort keeping fit and healthy in order to wear fashionable clothes. this could be connected to loving their body.
Secondly, As most people tend to judge others by looks, it can be one of the ways to show their identity and personality. For example, if a person wore very unique clothes, people could guess that person would seek their own fashion. In another case, if a person wore very trendy clothes, people could guess that that person is really sensitive to trends.
Wearing more and more fashionable attire may lead to development in fashion, industries ranging from apparel to accessories, which can have a huge impact on the global economy. In addition, this can become a career option for young people, since there would be a lot of growth opportunities. For instance, in a recent study it was found that the increasing demand of glamorous clothes in the recent past, has consequently provided employment to thousands of fashion graduates across nations.
In conclusion, according to me, it is clear that wearing fashionable clothes has become a positive way to both love ourselves and show our true selves. It also has a positive effect on the global economy.
Great !
2020年5月11日
Nicely written, Kim didn't have to make too many modifications in her correction!
But I disagree that fashion is a good thing. It's just another way of perpetuating a flawed economical principle, constant growth.
It's not sustainable, just like 80% of everything else that modern civilisation does, and furthers the destruction of our ecology for the material gain of few and the vanity of the masses. ;)
2020年5月11日
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