장성희 Sunghee Chang
Insooni, the R&B diva of Korea I'd like to introduce one of my favorite singers. She is Insooni, the R&B diva of Korea She was born in 1957 to a Korean mother and an African American father, who served in the US military in South Korea. Her father departed to US alone after the military service, and she was brought up by her mother alone. Her upbringing was fraught with difficulties from discrimination against visible miniority ; Because we, Korean, have the same nation and color, someone who has a different appearance, especially color is distinguished at a glance. Not too long ago, being different was being strange in Korea. Nowadays It can’t be said that such a thought is absolutely gone, but the Korean society is being changed to allow and receive the fact that each is different and should be respectful unless it’s disturbing or harm. Anyway at that time she must have had troubles making friends and felt lonely. To make it worse, she and her mother had suffered from the hardships of life, and she couldn’t help singing to make money. But singing songs to her was not merely meant a way to make money, but the power to overcome the difficulties. Her rich and beautiful voice mesmerized people soon. Insooni made her debut in 1978 in a group "Hee sisters". Since then she has recorded a total of 19 albums (14 regular). She is now South Korea's acclaimed R&B diva with a wide range of fans, even though over 30 years have passed since her debut. She is one of the few singers who performed at Carnegie Hall in New York and earned several top prizes at broadcasters' annual award ceremonies. Insooni reminds me of Hans Christian Andersen’s world famous fairy tale, "The ugly duckling" She was not strange, but special like a baby duck who was teased by his family and neighbors was truly a baby of a beautiful swan. I like her and her songs. Her story makes her songs abundantly and beautifully. Next time, I’d like to introduce you one of her songs I like. Thank you for reading. See you next time! Reference : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Insooni (writing), http://sports.khan.co.kr/news (picture)
2011年9月26日 12:45
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Insooni - The R&B Diva of Korea 이나,  더 자연스럽게:> Korea's Diva of R & B

I'd like to introduce one of my favorite singers (to you).

She's Insooni, Korea's Diva of R & B.

She was born in 1957 to a Korean mother and an African American father, who served in the US military in South Korea. After his military service ended, her father returned to the United States, abandoning his family, leaving Insooni's mother to raise her alone. Her upbringing was fraught with difficulties due to discrimination from the majority of Koreans who shunned anyone who did not look like they did.  Not too long ago, being different was seen as a real disability Korea.  Although this discrimination (and racism) still exists somewhat today, but the Korean society is beginning to accept the fact that all people are to be respected regardless of skin color.  

Anyway, at that time she must have found it difficult to make friends and I'm sure she felt lonely growing up. To make it worse, she had to sing to earn money because her mother also had great financial hardships.  However for Insooni, singing songs to her was not merely a means to make money, but it also taught her that she had the power to overcome the difficulties of life. Her rich and beautiful voice soon/quickly mesmerized everyone who heard it.

Insooni made her debut in 1978 in a group called, "Hee Sisters". Since that time she's recorded a total of 19 albums (14 regular < 뭐 뜻이에요 ? ). She's now South Korea's acclaimed R&B diva with a broad fan base, even though it's been over 30 years have passed since her debut. She is one of the few singers who has performed at Carnegie Hall in New York, and earned several top prizes at broadcasters' annual award ceremonies. 

Insooni reminds me of Hans Christian Andersen’s world famous fairy tale, "The Ugly Duckling".  Although at first she was percieved as strange, she eventually became special, like a baby duck, who was teased by his family and neighbors only to grow up into a beautiful swan. 


I like her and her music. Her story makes her songs have even more depth and beauty.

Next time, I’d like to introduce you to one of my favorite song's by Insooni.
Thank you for reading this. See you next time!

Reference : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Insooni (writing), http://sports.khan.co.kr/news (picture)   

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에세이경우제가진행을참조하다면, 수정하는계속할거다.

고유명사 (사람,장소/사물,사람이름)도대문자로써야합니다.

제목에중요한단어들을(, 대명사, 주요동사,형용사, 그리고부사) 대문자로써야합니다. 천만에요, 하지만,  앞으로에, 전 다른 긴 에세이를 수정할  수 없어요.

 

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

이건자연스럽거나일반적인방법의표현입니다.   

맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

코멘트나  제안입니다.     

<em>열쇠</em><em></em><em>색을</em><em></em><em>낸시</em><em>4366</em><em>으로</em><em></em><em>만들었습니다</em><em>. </em><em>도움이</em><em></em><em>됐으면</em><em></em><em>좋겠습니다</em><em></em>

2011年10月1日
아주 놀라운 이야기예요. 공유해 감사합니다.
2011年10月1日
I heard that she found out her father a few years ago and forgave him, but I couldn't check out whether it is true or not. 그녀가 몇 년 전에 그녀의 아버지를 만나고 그를 용서했다고 들었습니다. 하지만 그것이 사실인지 아닌지는 확인할 수 없었습니다.
2011年10月1日
그녀는 그녀의 아버지를 찾고 싶지 않아요? 아마도 아주 복잡이에요. 아마도 그녀의 어머님은 아버지를 잘 몰랐어요. 의심할 여지없이 그녀는 다른 많은 아기를 그렇게 처럼 있었어요.
2011年10月1日
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