First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am learning English language for the success in my university.
My national language is urdu.
my hobbies are swimming, reading novels, listen English songs and in leisure time hang around with friends.

Good start! but let me help you with some small issues:

I (always write I in an upper case)

I am learning English (to succeed) in my university.

My national language is Urdu ---> you can say ( My mother language is Urdu)

My hobbies are swimming, reading novels, (listenning to) English songs and in leisure time I (like to) hang out with friends.

Good luck! =D

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am learning English language for the success in my university.
My national language is urdu.
my hobbies are swimming, reading novels, listen English songs and in leisure time hang around with friends.

I am learning English language to pass my university degree.

My mother tongue is Urdu. ( I am a native Urdu speaker)

My hobbies are swimming, reading novels, listen English songs. And in leisure time (free time) I hang around with friends.