The 11the Traditional Health Care sports of National TCM Academies

The 11th Traditional Health Care sports of National TCM Academies will be held in my school on September 23th 2012. It is a solemn event . ,  A and our school leaders take it very seriously. What's more, today I saw that many delegations have come to my school for preparation. There are so many people!  Wow, it is exciting. Because our school is a Traditional Chinese Medicine school, we have to learn all kinds of traditional sports, such as; Tai Chi , Tai Chi Sword and longfist (or something like that). It 's really diffficult for me although it's good for our health. Anyway, I am still proud of my school. It is so beautiful and many delegations took pictures.  It seems that they feel comfortable in our school . I hope I have a chance to enjoy the ceremony.

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