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Hazéém
First notebook entry: Introducing myself Bonjour :) My name is Hazéém. I'm a informatic engineer. If I could or if I had really the daring, I will spend my days to travel and my nights to celebrate. Finally, every day, I spend my days in my car, at phone and at typing on my computer. However, I love what I do.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Bonjour :)

My name is Hazéém. I'm a informatic engineer. (Software engineer/programmer?  This is probably my ignorance so it's not a correction but a genuine question)

If I could or if I had really the were daring, I will would spend my days to travel travelling and my nights to celebrating. Finally (I think "In reality" would be more suitable), every day, I spend my days in my car, at on the phone and at typing on my computer. However, I love what I do.

 

Nice first effort.  You've clearly expressed what it is you wanted to say, just a few minor errors.

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