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Luis Brandao
Mother's day!
I'd just like to say : Mom I love you so much, you are everything to me and I want to be everything to you!
I've the best mom around the world ;D Happy Mother's Day everybody :DD
2013年5月12日 16:19
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Mother's day!
I'd just like to say : Mom I love you so much, you are everything to me and I want to be everything to you!
I've the best mom around the world ;D Happy Mother's Day everybody :DD
You're English is very good! one small tip. It is strange to use the contraction for "I have" like you do. I've the best mom in the world. It would sound better to say "I've got the best mom" or just write out " I have the best mom in the world."
Very nice entry.
2013年5月21日
Not at all Жарас. I try to be a good son :)
2013年5月22日
There is nothing to add! thanks for congratulations! you are the good son of the mother)
2013年5月12日
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