Can you check my " a short letter to a friend " Dear Grace, I hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to your stay at my place. There are a number of things I would like to share with you be

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Can you check my " a short letter to a friend " Dear Grace, I hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to your stay at my place. There are a number of things I would like to share with you before my vacation. The first thing is to get the keys, please knock the door of my neighbor Room 1101 which is just opposite to my apartment anytime after lunch and ask for Helen. She will be expecting you and she will tell you which key is which. If the weather gets hotter you may like to use the air condition, you will find that the remote control is in the draw of the coffee table in the living room. Then, you need to know that water heater is placed in the cabinet of the kitchen and just look for the “on/off “ switch. Finally, I leave some fruits, vegetables in the refrige so that you can eat when you arrive. By the way, there is a very nice Italian restaurant just opened recently in the neighbourhood. I recommend that you should go there to try because the food is awesome and price is very reasonable. There is also a big public library nearby if you like to spend sometime in reading. All right then, enjoy your stay and look after my flat. See you soon!

2013年5月19日 11:48

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Can you check my " a short letter to a friend "

Excellent! Added commas to give pauses, fixed typos, 'will leave' because it is future, and added a thank you!

Dear Grace,
I hope you are doing well and I am looking forward to your stay at my place. There are a number of things I would like to share with you before my vacation.

The first thing is, to get the keys, please knock the door of my neighbor Room 1101, which is just opposite to my apartment, anytime after lunch and ask for Helen. She will be expecting you and she will tell you which key is which.

If the weather gets hotter, you may like to use the air conditioner, you will find that the remote control is in the drawer of the coffee table in the living room. Then, you need to know that the water heater is placed located in the cabinet of the kitchen, and just look for the “on/off “ switch. Finally, I will leave some fruits, vegetables in the refrigerator so that you can eat when you arrive.

By the way, there is a very nice Italian restaurant just opened recently in the neighbourhood. I recommend that you should go there to try it because the food is awesome and price is very reasonable. There is also a big public library nearby if you like to spend sometime in reading.

All right then, enjoy your stay and look after my flat thank you for looking after my flat!
See you soon!