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My story about making new friends I had dinner with my new friend from Korea today. It was much better than I had not expected. Before I saw him, I heard from a teacher that a Korean exchange student learning Japanese wanted to have some friends in Japan. I have two Japanese friends learning Korean, so I went to see him with the friends. We three first arrived at the restaurant and soon he came with his Korean friend. When I saw the face of his friend, I was very surprised. I know the face! Actually, the friend of his is also a friend of mine! That's why we all made friends with each other right away. We five decided to do the language exchange activity on Friday evening. I believe that we will be exactly good language partners. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I want someone to revise this writing if there are some mistakes. Please teach me some ideas to write the story in more natural English.
2013年5月22日 11:52
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My story about making new friends

I had dinner with my new friend from Korea today. It was much better than I had not expected.

Before I saw him, I heard from a teacher that a Korean exchange student learning Japanese wanted to (have/make) some friends in Japan.
I have two Japanese friends learning Korean, so I went to see him with the my friends.
We three The three of us first arrived at the restaurant and soon he came with his Korean friend.
When I (saw the face of his friend/saw his friend's face), I was very surprised. (I knew the his face!/I knew him!) Actually, the his friend of his is also a friend of mine!
That's why we all made became friends with each other right away. We five The five of us decided to do the language exchange activity on Friday evenings. I believe that we will be exactly really good language partners.
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I want someone to revise this writing if there are some/any mistakes. Please teach me some ideas to write the story in more natural English.

2013年5月24日
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