a Chinese poem
The poem was written by a student 24 years old in HK Chinese university.From one word to two,three and so on.We call it a hundred word poem.It tells us a true love story.I am trying to translate it into English.
见 jian: flipped
惊艳jing yan: amazing drace
目流连mu liu lian: eyes on you
再难思迁zai nan si qian: nothing will change my heart
踌躇欲向前zhi zhu yu xiang qian: hesitate to step to you
只恐天上人间zhi kong tian shang ren jian: afraid immeasurably vast distance between us
悲欢喜怒一线牵:bei huan xi nu yi xian qian: laughter, anger, sorrow, and happiness all depend on you
循环往复恨此心坚 hate my firm heart in the recirculation
花开花落转眼已三年 flower glows folwer falls 3 years passed
天人合一处垂首对漪涟: look down sliently to the sparkling raindrops in"Unity of Man and Nature"(a famou scenery in the university)
思或淡情未移口三缄 still loving you deeply in my heart without saying a word
燕去燕归沧海桑田 swallows fly ,swallows return, how time flyes
倘注定有分无缘 if destined to meet but not fated to be together
亦感蒙赐初面 also appreciated for the given first seeing
纵此生不见zong ci sheng bu jian: though never meet you again
平安惟愿ping an wei yuan: only wish you hapness
若得闲ruo de xian: if at leisure
仍念reng nian: still missing
歉 qian: be very sorry
What a blue love theme! I wrote it in Chinese,as follows.Perhaps,you will ask why the words are different from what I printed,more complicate.While,it is called Traditional Chinese characters.You will see it in Hongkong,Taiwan and Macau.
尋找適合你的 英語 教師……
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我喜欢用英文写诗,所以我可以给你我自己的英文版本。有些部分很难因为音节的限制,我破坏很多语法规则才能这么做。但还可以认出意思,还试着保留一些本来中文的含糊不清,因为这样才有是个性风味我觉得。
见
see,
惊艳
and stunned.
目流连
eyes linger.
再难思迁
shift thoughts; harder.
踌躇欲向前
want forward; waver.
只恐天上人间
one fear: divine, fleet world.
悲欢喜怒一线牵
sad, manic rage, all led; one thread.
循环往复恨此心坚
cycle, and back, this hard heart: hate.
花开花落转眼已三年
flowers bloom, fall. one blink; three years.
天人合一处垂首对漪涟:
at "man, nature: one" hang head; tears ripple.
思或淡情未移口三缄
mull or don't care? unmoved, mouth seals three.
燕去燕归沧海桑田
doves leave and back. blue seas turn green.
倘注定有分无缘
ill-fate, if destined to part.
亦感蒙赐初面
still glad: blinding first face.
纵此生不见
though this life, won't see,
平安惟愿
one-wish: safe, sound.
若得闲
when idle,
仍念
still miss.
歉
guilt.
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就是没有英文建议 没人修改啊
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不错,诗不错,翻译也不错
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谢啦~!
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good job
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