one day

Today,it is pretty hot. I can't stand the weather! I like the raining because it is cold. That makes feel comfortable. <em>I had a delicious breakfast. In order to catch a bus, I didn't eat my breakfast.* </em>I am pretty hungry and weak. Fortunately, my classmate gave me a piece of bread when he knew that I didn't have a breakfast. His care made me feel warm and happy.

* You wrote that you "had a delicious breakfast" but then you also said that you didn't eat your breakfast. 你的意思是你有煮一個很好吃的早餐，可是你因為急著要搭公車所以不能吃你的早餐嗎？如果是這個意思，那就要這樣子寫："I made a delicious breakfast, but I couldn't eat it because I had to catch a bus."

One Day

Today,it is pretty hot. I can't stand this weather! I prefer the raining, because it is cold and that makes feel comfortable. I had a delicious breakfast made, but in order to catch my bus, I didn't eat it. my breakfast. So now I am pretty hungry and weak. Fortunately, my classmate has given me some bread because he knew that I didn't have a breakfast. He's made me feel warm and happy through because of his thoughtfulness care.