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My City. My city is Tianjin,it is a beautiful place.There are a lot of delicious food and beautiful places in it.And it has a long history.My city is a The autonomous region,Do you know the autonomous ragion?haha,I don't know! There is Gou Bu LI stuffed bun, ErDuo Yan Fried cake,18th Street twist and so on in Tianjin.I like them!They are delicious! There is Huangyaguan section,TianDa,Ancient culture street and so on in Tianjin.There are beautiful! I love my city,I love Tianjin.
2013年7月7日 12:14
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My City.

My city is Tianjinit is a beautiful placeThere are a lot of delicious food dishes and beautiful places in it, and it has a long historyMy city is an The autonomous regionDo you know the autonomous region? HahaI don't know!
There is Gou Bu Li Stuffed Bun, ErDuo Yan Fried Cake18th Street Twist and so on in TianjinI like themThey are delicious!
There is Huangyaguan sectionTianDaAncient Culture Street and so on in TianjinThey are beautiful!
I love my cityI love Tianjin.

 

I changed food to dishes because you used the plural forms are and places, and the word food generally has no plural form. When one article is used for more than one object, the tenses must agree. There are many flowers and trees. There are many flowers and a tree.

2013年7月8日
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