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Translation practice (Chinese to English) Please can you check my English translation of this Chinese text to make sure I have understood it all correctly? Thank you. Due to word restrictions, I will post my translation in the corrections section. 水泉村是个贫穷落后的地方,学校教堂破旧,上下课连个钟表都没有,只能根据日光的移动判断时间,当日光照到教室中间那根本头柱子上的钉子时,孩子们就知道该下课了。 水泉小学的高老师要回家看望病病重的母亲,村长从邻村找来只上过小学的魏敏芝给高老师代一个月的课。高老师见魏敏芝只有三十四岁,不想要。村长说, 找这么一个人也不容易,先让她凑合一个月吧。 水泉小学原先有三四十个学生,每年都有学生因家里穷离开学校,现在只剩二十八个了。高老师临走再三嘱咐魏敏芝,一定要把学生看住,一个都不能少。 十岁的张慧科十分淘气,他不承认比自己大不了多少的魏敏芝是老师, 还是在村长的强迫下才不情愿地叫了一声“魏老师”。他因家里欠债,不得不到城里打工,却在火车站与同乡走散。魏敏芝记住高老师临走前的嘱咐,决心把张慧科找回来,她只身一人踏上了进城之路,开始了茫茫人海里的寻找。经历了千辛万苦,终于遇到好心人,她在电视台工作人员的热心帮助下,走上电视,对着不知身在何处的张慧科喊道:“张慧科,你在哪里啊?你都快把我给急死了。。。。。。你跟我回去吧。。。。”流落街头的张慧科看到了这个节目,禁不住流下了热泪。。。。。。该片的大团圆结局令人高兴,社会上不少好心人向他们伸出了援助之手,张慧科又回到了课堂。村长说要用人们的捐款剑一所新的学校。
2014年2月22日 17:21
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My translation

Shuiquan village is a poor, backwards place, the school is run down, and doesn’t even have a clock to tell when to start or finish class, they can only rely on the sun to judge the time. When the sun light hits the nails in the post in the middle of the classroom, the children know it should be time to finish class.
Suiquan’s teacher Gao is going to return home to look after his seriously ill mother. The head of the village has found a replacement teacher who had only attended primary school called Wei Minzhi to take over his classes for 1 month. When Gao saw Wei Minzhi is only 14 years old, he didn’t want Wei Minzhi to do it. The village head said, finding such a person wasn’t easy, and they would have to make do with her for 1 month.
Shuiquan primary school originally had 30 or 40 students, but every year students left because their families were poor, and now there was only 28 students left. Before he left Gao repeatedly told Wei Minzhi she must keep an eye on the students, one less was not acceptable.
Ten year old Zhang Huike was extremely naughty, he didn’t acknowledge that Wei Minzhi, who was not much older than him was the teacher, and only after being pushed by the head of the village to did he reluctantly call her teacher Wei. Because his family were in debt Huike had no choice but to go the city to work part time, and got separated from his fellow villagers at the train station. Wei Minzhi remembered what Gao said to her before he left, and decided to go and find Huike and bring him back. She set out alone on the road into the city and started to look to look for him among the sea of people. After many difficulties she finally met a kind hearted person who worked at a TV station and was eager to help. She went on television and appealed to Huike: Zhang Huike, where are you? You are worrying me to death….come back with me. Huike who was wandering the streets destitute and alone saw the program and couldn’t help but cry……The big reunion made people very happy. Many kind hearted people from the community extended a helping hand, and Huike returned to school. The head of the village said they would use the donations to build a new school.

 

Excellent!

打工 just means to work/be employed. It can be either part-time or full-time, depending upon the context. In China, a villager like Zhang Huike is hardly likely go to the city to work PART-TIME. 

2014年2月24日
学校的教堂应该是School's church吧? 话说村里的小学会有教堂啊。。。。。。 总体意思很到位,加油。
2014年2月23日
that‘s a movie~
2014年2月22日

My translation

 

Shuiquan village is a poor, backwards place, the school is run down, and doesn’t even have a clock to tell when to start or finish class, they can only rely on the sun to judge the time. When the sun light hits the nails in the post in the middle of the classroom, the children know it should be time to finish class.

Suiquan’s teacher Gao is going to return home to look after his seriously ill mother. The head of the village has found a replacement teacher who had only attended primary school called Wei Minzhi to take over his classes for 1 month. When Gao saw Wei Minzhi is only 14 years old, he didn’t want Wei Minzhi to do it. The village head said, finding such a person wasn’t easy, and they would have to make do with her for 1 month.

Shuiquan primary school originally had 30 or 40 students, but every year students left because their families were poor, and now there was only 28 students left. Before he left Gao repeatedly told Wei Minzhi she must keep an eye on the students, one less was not acceptable.

Ten year old Zhang Huike was extremely naughty, he didn’t acknowledge that Wei Minzhi, who was not much older than him was the teacher, and only after being pushed by the head of the village to did he reluctantly call her teacher Wei. Because his family were in debt Huike had no choice but to go the city to work part time, and got separated from his fellow villagers at the train station. Wei Minzhi remembered what Gao said to her before he left, and decided to go and find Huike and bring him back. She set out alone on the road into the city and started to look to look for him among the sea of people. After many difficulties she finally met a kind hearted person who worked at a TV station and was eager to help. She went on television and appealed to Huike: Zhang Huike, where are you? You are worrying me to death….come back with me. Huike who was wandering the streets destitute and alone saw the program and couldn’t help but cry……The big reunion made people very happy. Many kind hearted people from the community extended a helping hand, and Huike returned to school. The head of the village said they would use the donations to build a new school.

2014年2月22日
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