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Thinking
When I think about my life I see that sometimes life shows us the truth. But sometimes we have to do something to change what is happening though many times we have to wait for a opportunity. Even when things seem terrifying we have to be brave and to fight! But sometimes many things are happening and they don't let us see what we can do. But you can lift your head again! And know there's a reason to fight always so never give up! ;)
2014年3月22日 17:14
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Thinking
When I think about my life, I see that sometimes life shows us the truth. But sometimes we have to do something to change what is happening. Other times, we have to wait for an opportunity. Even when things seem terrifying, we have to be brave and be willing to fight! But sometimes many things are happening and they seem to prevent us from doing our best. However, you can lift up your head again! Know there's a reason to fight always, so never give up! ;)
Well said!
2014年3月22日
-"An opportunity" - use "an not a"
-be brave and fight - do not use "to fight".
nice good stuff!
2014年4月19日
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