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it is PETS5 Writing part, correct it .... lol ~~~ thanks the question: whether someone should stay in one place all his life? Write an article to express your point of view on this topic. You should write no less than 250 words. "Whether we should stay in one place all our life?" this question is so common seen in modern society. No longer seems a strange topic at all. However in previous generation, our parents and grandparents, who were happy that living in one place even in one small district! Because their subconsiousness or our traditional thinking tell them:" it demonstrates their logalty to the ancestors." In addition, they also want to bring up their descendants at here and let the descendants inherit their property. Usually, Chinese look upon their old property ( more old, more important) as their " root", everything would grow base on the root! So, that is why old generation longs for living in one place. Though, in my opinion, their era is gone, it is modern now, with sufficient opening and reforming of china since 1990s, more and more new notions, swormed into china, we got a lot. Thereafter, "Stay in one place all someone's life" will be no longer seemed popular. First, at present, evironment pollation, I think, is a big issue not only for us, but also arround the world. Specially in Beijing Shanghai, so- called prosperous and sophistcated city in China. Second, different life style, often we call " generation gap" among our family, that is why sometimes we can't live with our parents very compatible, of course, It doesnot mean, we are not dutiful. Last, obviously, I think, to persue more perfect life and reach higher living standard! Therefore, all of efforts from us are only pointing one destiny: higher living standard.Manifest, it have had big collsion with our old notion. Finally, if let me choose, I will select " to change place I lived" without thinking twice.

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it is PETS5 Writing part, correct it .... lol ~~~ thanks

the question: whether someone should stay in one place all his life?
Write an article to express your point of view on this topic. You should write no less than 250 words.

"Whether we should stay in one place all for our entire life?" this question is so commonly seen in modern society that it is no longer seemed to be a strange topic. However in previous generations, our parents and grandparents, who were happy that living to live in one placeeven in one a small district! Because their subconsiousness subconscious and our traditional thinking. tell them:" it help demonstrates their loyalty to their ancestors." In addition, they also want to bring up their descendants at here and let have their descendants come here to inherit their property. Usually, Chinese look upon their old property ( the more older it is, the more importance it has) as an example of their root. Everything would grow base upon that root! So, that is why the old generations longs for to live living in one place.
Though, in my opinion, their era is gone. It is the modern era now with sufficient openings and reformations in China.  Since 1990s, more and more new notions were brought upon swormed into China that we got a lot out of it. Thereafter, "Stay in one place in someone's entire life" will be no longer seemed be popular.
Firstly, at the presents of the environmental pollution, I think is a big issue not only for us, but also arround the entire world, especially in Beijing and Shanghai, the so- called prosperous and sophistcated cities in China. Secondly, the difference in lifestyles, we often  called  "the generation gaps" in amongst our family that is why sometimes we can't couldn't live with our parents' expected needs? very compatible. Of course, It does not mean that we are not submissive dutiful. Last Thirdly, I obviously think  it is to persue pursue a more perfect life and reach a higher level of living standard! Therefore, all our efforts from us points to one direction one destiny  and that is the  higher living standard. Apparently Manifest, however, it have had big collides greatly with our old notions.
Finally In conclusion, if they let me choose, I will select to move to another location  " to change place I lived" without even thinking twice.

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