搜尋自 英語 {1} 教師……
honest girl
Presentation
Hello everybody, I learnt English language, I have obtained my diplomat since 2009. I am trying to develop my language production because nowadays the language is the main factor to communicate with other , to practice and exchange language ideas....
2014年4月18日 11:43
修正 · 2
Hi! I just correct your passage, good job! I cut it down quite a bit because there were some unecessary parts and some parts that were a bit confusing. Hope this helps! - Teacher Shahmir
Presentation
Hello everybody, I am learning English. I obtained a diploma in 2009(I am confused what this sentece means). I am trying to develop my language skills because language is of course the way we communicate with others to exchange ideas.
2014年4月18日
想進步快一點嗎？
加入此學習社群，來試做免費的練習吧！
