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The Wedding of my friend The wedding took place on saturday tonight when a special day of my friend. she looked splendid in the wedding dress. With a shine countenance, she was really happy. how was my classmates? they looked like very happy when came to congratulation their friend and they told to funny together.How a noteworthy memory!
2014年4月21日 03:36
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My friend's wedding. 

The wedding took place on Saturday tonight It was a special day for my friend. She looked splendid in her wedding dress. She shined and looked really happy. How were my classmates? They looked like very happy when they came to congratulate their friend and they told jokes together. What a noteworthy memory!

2014年6月3日
最后的how改成what。因为回忆是名词。
2014年4月21日
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