Listening!

Hi everyone, I was listening TO a speech and I need to write something about it. Could you tell me IF THIS is that correct?

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I am practicing listening--

Hi everyone, I was listening a speech and I want to write something about it. Could you tell me if this is correct?

"This course has changed my life because I can apply it to myself, other courses focused on the end but this course focuses on the means. I can change my relationship with my family, because they are what is really important in my life, and the best part is when I learned to appreciate and love myself. I think that taking this course could be the best decision that I have ever made."

Thank you.