krista
firstday i have foodpoisining today and dont know what's wrong with me... nowadays my english skill is very childish and simple. i think i have to study and how to make long sentance with using polished . studying english is very fun but most important thing is that study hard after 10 minutes i forgot them all..!!! no way!! i wish God create my brain agin or change new thing !!!!!
2014年7月23日 07:35
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firstday --> The First Day

 

i have foodpoisining today and dont know what's wrong with me... --> I have food poisoning today and I don't know what's wrong with me.


nowadays my english skill is very childish and simple.  --> My English skills are childlike and basic.


i think i have to study and how to make long sentance with using polished . --> I think I have to study and learn how to make long, polished sentences.


studying english is very fun but most important thing is that study hard after 10 minutes i forgot them all..!!!  --> Studying English is very fun but the most important thing for me to do is to try and remember what I study. I seem to forget everything after only 10 minutes.


no way!!


i wish God create my brain agin or change new thing !!!!! --> (kind of a weird sentence) I wish god would make my brain again or help me learn new things.

 

Good job. I highlighted some mistakes and rewrote your sentences as I would say them in bold.

2014年7月23日
Hi ya ^^ Nice meeting you, Krista! I think that studying a foreign language is not an easy task. For example, I have been trying to learn Korean but sometimes I get really confused about the honorific form and tenses! Let's work hard together ^^
2014年9月13日
drink ginger tea twice a day~everyday! I got food poisoning for 6 days and now it's gone. :)
2014年8月4日
Thank you so much for your teaching!!!!
2014年7月25日
Hi, i made some suggestions for better sentence :) firstday I had food poisoning today and did not know what was wrong with me... Currently, my english skill is very childish and simple. I think I have to learn how to make long sentence using more polished style and grammar. Studying english to me is very. I can study hard but after 10 minutes I forgot them all..!!! no way!! I wish God create my brain again or change new thing to make englisg easier to learn !!!!! *Good luck on your quest for better English ! I feel same way with Korean! :)) ~Harry
2014年7月25日
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