Sara
Misadventure :) Last Friday morning was a sunny day so I decided to read a book in the garden. When I felt too hot, I stood up, took my book and went towards the door to come back inside but suddenly I felt pain. I had stepped on a bee; it didn't take it too well and I wasn't wearing shoes so... I haven't been able to walk normally for six days and it still hurts a little.
2014年7月23日 10:42
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Misadventure :)

 

Last Friday morning was a sunny day so I decided to read a book in the garden. When I felt too hot (or 'when the heat became too much'), I stood up, took my book and went towards the door to come back inside.


Suddenly I felt pain; I had stepped on a bee. It didn't take this too well and I wasn't wearing shoes, so...

 

I haven't been able to walk normally for six days and it still hurts a little.

 

Well done Sara, this is very well written. Many native speakers couldn't do better. 

2014年7月23日
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