Hi, I need help practicing English.
My name is Vania, I live in Brazil, I am marriage married. I have one daughter, I am studying education at university pedagogue and studying english at school and at home. I worked fifteen years with tourism, and have traveled to Orlando, Cancun, Buenos Aires and almost all states of Brazil. I need help to practice English.
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Good job! There are two general corrections that I have.
1. English uses periods more often than some other languages. So, many of the places that you used commas should have a period. "My name is Vania. I live in Brazil. I am married. I have one daughter."
2. English requires a subject or subject pronoun. So, you need to always say who the sentence is about. "I have one daughter." "I need help..."
Keep up the learning!