Helen
Get up I usually get up at 6 o'clock,but on Saturday and Sunday I will get up late.At 7 o'clock get up.After getting up,I'll brush my teeth,wash a face again,the last to eat breakfast.
2014年8月22日 05:36
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Get up

I usually get up at 6 o'clock, but on Saturday and Sunday I will get up late. At 7 o'clock get up On the weekend I will get up at 7 o'clock. After getting up, I'll brush my teeth, wash  a  my  face again, the last to  and then  eat breakfast.

 

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I usually get up at 6 o'clock, but on Saturday and Sunday I will get up late. On the weekend I will get up at 7 o'clock. After getting up, I'll brush my teeth, wash my face again, and then eat breakfast.

 

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We can make this composition a little better.  Rather than saying "get up", it is better to say "wake up".  Also, 7 o'clock is not "late", but it is "later" than 6 o'clock.  Therefore, the following is a little better:

I usually wake up at 6 o'clock, but on Saturday and Sunday I will wake up later. On the weekend I will wake up at 7 o'clock. After waking up, I'll brush my teeth, wash my face again, and then eat breakfast.

2014年8月22日
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