Wilson
Dinner I went to a restaurant with six colleages for dinner tonight.the sea food is delicious so all of as ate more .i ate more than i predicted that makes me feeling guilty.so i suggested we should walk to home instead of driving a car.they agreed with me so we did that way.i walked to home for a hour. I feel better now.
2014年8月22日 15:35
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Dinner

I went to a restaurant with six colleages colleagues for dinner tonight.  The seafood is was delicious delicious, so all of as  everyone ate more. I ate more than I predicted. That makes left me feeling guilty.so i  I suggested we should walk to home instead of driving a car. They agreed with me so we walked home did that way.i  I walked for a hour and finally arrived to home. I feel better now.

 

 

Wilson.   Just remember that "i" is a personal pronoun in English which is treated like a Proper Noun.  So you need to always capitalize it.   Also, check your spelling before submitting it on paper or to an employer.  Otherwise, great job!

2014年8月22日
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