Sarah
Improve my English ^^ Hello Everyone, I am Sarah . :) I want to improve my English so much because its important for my career. Now I am a final year in Pharmacy faculty and I will get a new job in the next year . So it will better if I can speak well in English. ^^ Thank you .
2014年10月23日 05:14
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Some small corrections:


I want to improve my English so much because it isimportant for my career

 

"Now I am a final year student at the Pharmacy faculty" or "I am a final year pharmacy student"

 

I will get a new job in the next year

 

So it will be better if I can speak well in English. ^^

2014年10月23日
Thank you so much Ruthi :))
2014年10月23日
Good luck in your studies Sarah
2014年10月23日
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