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Could somebody correct my sentences it is the second that l have encountered same issue Which is arise from by Dhl
2014年10月24日 06:52
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Could somebody correct my sentences

it is the second that l have encountered same issue Which is arise from by Dhl

 

it would be better to say

 

This is the second time that I have encountered the same issue with DHL

or

This is the second time this issue has arisen with DHL

 

Consider - Changing "it is" to "this" - as it has happened before

The second what? you need to use the word "time"

Tense:- should be consistent - I have / which is - I have changed the wording. 

 

 

 

 

 

2014年10月24日
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