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Good Weekend The weekend It's made for enjoy it!!! The weekend begins, I really like to spend the weekend with my family and friends. My friend Guillermo comes my house today to have a cup of coffe with his wife and son. Tomorrow I will travel to Granada. Have you ever traveled to Granada? Granada is really beauty. In my next post I talk you more about Granada. Bye,
2014年11月22日 22:24
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Good Weekend

The weekend It's is made for enjoy it!!! enjoyment!

The weekend begins! I really like to spend the weekend with my family and friends. My friend Guillermo along with his wife and son comes came to my house today to have a cup of coffe. with his wife and son. <-- take note how I moved this to the beginning (behind your name) in the sentence

Tomorrow, I will travel to Granada. Have you ever traveled  <--- there is no need to mention the word traveled again been to Granada? Granada is really beauty.

In my next post I will talk you more about Granada.

Bye,

I hope this helps,

Jerry (English Teacher/Tutor)

2014年11月22日
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