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Anatomy So the first day I got into the dissection lab I was nervous I had never seen a dead person before. Surprisingly the when I was handed the scalpel, I was just smooth. I discovered I have gifted hands.
2014年11月23日 08:43
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Anatomy

So the first day I got into the dissection lab I was nervous because I had never seen a dead person before. Surprisingly the when I was handed the scalpel, I was just smooth. I discovered I have gifted hands.

2014年11月23日

Anatomy

So on the first day when I got into the dissection lab, I was nervous: I had never seen a dead person before. Surprisingly, though, when I was handed the scalpel, I was adept at using it. I discovered that I have gifted hands.

2014年11月23日
You're saying there that you were nervous because you thought you might not have seen a dead person prior to entering the lab. It's a pretty easy mistake to make; you need a colon or a 'because' or something after the word 'nervous'.
2014年11月23日
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