Afraid1

Some of my friends have asked me "what are you afraid of?" - I'm afraid of many things. Snake almost people afraid of it  Most people are afraid of snakes. When i was little, about 7-8 years old, there was one snake that almost made me die. I was at a small cliff, I even not see the snake clearly I did not see the snake clearly,I just felt it near my feet. I fell down from the cliff, it wasn't high up, but enough to have possibly killed me.When I was rolling I thought I would die, but suddenly my mother comes into my mind, and I told myself I won't die because I havent yet grown up to take care of my mom. And I catch all waht I can catched an I held on to what I could find to try my best to keep me from falling down. Finally, my mother come to save me. When I fell into my mom's arms, I began to cry and hold her tightly.

Hi there, great work! For your next entry, try to work on tenses. You are writing a reflective piece here about an experience, so remember to use the past tense of verbs when describing events.