Brian
Why I come to italti? My name is Brian,I come from china.I have learned English for four months.I think I just only speak some simple sentences.I am interested in English.I am not smart but I am diligent.I study English everyday.I like watching American movies and listening American music.Now I can sing several songs.My favorite song is (all of me).It's a very nice song.Watching movies and listening music can help my English.I learn pronunciation from songs.I also listen go speeches.Especially Steven Jobs' speeches.He use a lot of good adjective words to describe his products.I learned many adjective words.Such as beautiful wonderful terrific gorgeous unbelievable and fantastic. I want to find a native speaker to help my English.Meanwhile I can teach you English also.I can teach you patiently and I hope you can teach me like that. Thank you for reading.Have a good day.
2015年1月3日 18:07
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Why have I come to italti?

My name is Brian, I come from China. I have learned English for four months. I think I just  I can only speak some simple sentences. I am interested in English. I am not smart but I am diligent. I study English everyday. I like watching American movies and listening to American music. Now I can sing several songs. My favorite song is "All of me". It's a very nice song. Watching movies and listening to music can help my English.I learn pronunciation from songs. I also listen to speeches. Especially Steven Jobs' speeches. He uses a lot of good adjectives words to describe his products. I have learnted many adjective words, Ssuch as beautiful, wonderful, terrific, gorgeous, unbelievable and fantastic. (in English we use a comma [,] to sperate words in a list) 
I want to find a native speaker to help improve my English. Meanwhile I can teach you English also.I can teach you patiently and I hope you can teach me like that.
Thank you for reading. Have a good day.

 

This read really well, just a few minor suggestions. I'd be very happy to talk to you to improve your English. 

2015年1月3日
Brian, your interest makes you smarter than most. Diligence and motivation are very awesome personal traits.
2015年1月3日

Why I come to italti?

My name is Brian,I come from china.I have been learning English for four months. I only speak some simple sentences.I am interested in English.I am not smart but I am diligent.I study English everyday.I like watching American movies and listening to American music.Now I can sing several songs.My favorite song is (all of me).It's a very nice song.Watching movies and listening to music can help my English.I learn pronunciation from songs.I also listen to speeches.Especially Steven Jobs' speeches.He use a lot of good adjective words to describe his products.I learned many adjective words.Such as beautiful wonderful terrific gorgeous unbelievable and fantastic.
I want to find a native speaker to help my English.Meanwhile I can teach you English also.I can teach you patiently and I hope you can teach me like that.
Thank you for reading.Have a good day.

2015年1月3日

Why I come to italti?

My name is Brian,I come from china.I have learned English for four months.I think I just only speak some simple sentences.I am interested in English.I am not smart but I am diligent.I study English everyday.I like watching American movies and listening American music.Now I can sing several songs.My favorite song is (all of me).It's a very nice song.Watching movies and listening music can help my English.I learn pronunciation from songs.I also listen go speeches.Especially Steven Jobs' speeches.He use a lot of good adjective words to describe his products.I learned many adjective words.Such as beautiful wonderful terrific gorgeous unbelievable and fantastic.
I want to find a native speaker to help my English.Meanwhile I can teach you Chinese also.I can teach you patiently and I hope you can teach me like that.
  Finally I hope you can give some suggestion for learn English.Thank you for reading.Have a good day.

2015年1月3日
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