Slow down, you needn't drive so fast, we have plenty of time.
All good.
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I can't express how greatful I am to you.
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Slow down
Slow down, you needn't don't need to drive so fast, we have plenty of time.
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This sentence looks pretty good to me. :)
You may or may not have an extra comma in this sentence, but I'll let one of the grammar professionals advise you on that ;)