Respond to a written request: TOEIC writing test I’d like you to correct my answer for a sample TOEIC question. <Directions> Respond to the e-mail as if you work at this company. In your e-mail, make TWO suggestions and ask ONE question. From: James Turner To: All employees Subject: Xmas party Sent: November 17, 10:21 A.M. All employees, This year our annual Christmas get-together will be held at the Astona Hotel on December 18 from seven o’clock. Several employees have mentioned that they intend to bring their children to the event. Could you e-mail me back with any entertainment ideas? <My answer> Dear Mr. James Turner / Mr. Turner, I received an e-mail about “Xmas party.” My family always look forward to the party. I have two suggestions and one question. First / Firstly, how about exchanging small gifts? That could make gift-giving more fun. Second / Secondly, why don’t you accept some employees who want to show their special skills which entertain all with? We not only could enjoy ourselves but also know more about the employees. Finally, can you tell me if it is possible for you to book a few rooms for our children? There might be some children who fall asleep during the party, which would make their families leave in the middle. If you want to speak to me today about this, please give me a call at (Tel. No). I’ll be in the office until 3:00. Regards, (My full name) Thank you.