Joyce
the climate of my city The summers in my city are very hot wiht Temperatures high as 38℃。 The summer from june to october. It seldom rains in summer. So It is very dry. In the winter, It is cold with Temperature -5℃—10 ℃ and heary storm. Sometimes we have a shortly snow and foggy day. So it is necessary to go out with mask
2015年4月21日 20:33
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The Climate of My City

 

The summers in my city are very hot with temperatures as high as 38℃。 The summer is from June to October. It seldom rains in summer, so it is very dry. In the winter, it is cold with temperatures of -5℃—10 ℃ and heavy storms. Sometimes we have a short snow storm and foggy days. So It is necessary to go out with a mask.

 

 

Well written overall! Pay attention to your capitalization and punctuation, and good luck with your studies :) 

2015年4月21日
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