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New Day Hello! Today I am happy! I am happy to meet a new day. I am happy to see the smiles of relatives, hear their voices . Today is a sunny day. And I hope that it will be perfect! Thank you for your attention!
2015年5月28日 07:19
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A New Day

Hello!
Today I am happy! I am happy to meet a new day. I am happy to see the smiles of relatives, and to hear their voices.
Today is a sunny day. And I hope that it will be perfect!
Thank you for your attention!

 

2015年5月28日
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