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[Part 1:Dancing ]

Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
Yes, I enjoy dancing. Actually, I am not good at dancing, but I can dance and enjoy the atmoshere in a party.

Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
There are many traditional dances in Korea. The one most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In the Buh-che-chum, dancers are women and they wear beautiful dresses. Dancers They use large fans. In the dance being performed, the dancers represent shaped images using the fans; e.g. birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans use this dance during many celebrations.

Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even [in the TV programs], they don’t show the traditional dancing.
However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.

General Notes:

--Too many instances of "dancers" in Q2. Once you have established a subject, you substitute for something generic (he/she/they) rather than continuing to use the same word over and over.

--I would not recommend using 'e.g.' as part of a sentence. You are better off with "for example..." to add additional examples of the topic you are writing about.

--"...in the TV programs," is better off as "...on TV," although there are other ways to state the same thing. Either way, you establish "programs" as encompassing of all broadcast television, so you can't use 'the' in this statement. In/on television or television programs makes it clear you are talking about all programs.

[Part 1:Dancing ]

[Part 1:Dancing ]

Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
Yes, I enjoy dancing. Actually, I am not good at dancing but I can dance and enjoy the atmosphere in a party.

Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
There are many traditional dances in Korea. The one most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In the Buh-che-chum, the dancers are women in beautiful dresses. Dancers use large fans. In the dance being performed, the dancers represent shaped images using the fans e.g. birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans use this dance during many celebrations.

Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs, they don’t show traditional dancing.
However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop our national pride.

Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
Yes, I enjoy dancing. Acutually, I am not good at dancing but I can dance and enjoy the party atmosphere.

Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
There are many traditional dances in Korea. One of the most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In Buh-che-chum, dancers wear beautiful dresses and use large fans. In Buh-che-chum, the dancers imitate shaped images using the fans, for example, birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans perform this dance during various celebrations.

Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs they don’t show the traditional dancing.
However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.

I will take a IELTS 2months later. It is answer about IELTS speaking test.
Please fix my incorrect English. Thank you.

[Part 1:Dancing ]

[Part 1:Dancing ]

Q1. Do you enjoy dancing?
Yes, I enjoy dancing. Acutually, I am not good at dance but I can dance and enjoy the atmosphere in a party.

Q2. Tell me about any traditional dancing in your country.
There are many traditional dances in Korea. The one most well-known is the Buh-che-chum. In the Buh-che-chum, dancers are women and they wear beautiful dresses. Dancers use large fans. In the dance being performed, the dancers represent shaped images using the fans e.g. birds, flowers, butterflies and waves. They are beautiful to watch, and they emphasize the balance of nature. Many Koreans use this dance during many celebrations.

Q3. Do you think traditional dancing will be popular in the future?
I don’t think traditional dancing will be popular in the future, because it is not that appealing to the younger generation. Actually, the younger generation is more interested in modern Western-style dancing and even in the TV programs, they don’t show the traditional dancing.
However, I think it is important to keep traditional dancing alive to preserve our culture and develop out national pride.