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Lisa loves her boss: Lisa works in a marketing departament. Her boss is Adam, 40 years old, strong and handsome. He´s a sexy man. But he doesn´t know that Lisa exist. She need stay with him. Lisa think that a day, Adam come to her desk and say her: "Lisa, I need you, I need stay with you". Thanks for corrections.
2015年7月30日 12:39
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Lisa loves her boss:

Lisa works in a the marketing departament.

Her boss is Adam, 40 years old, strong and handsome. He´s a sexy man.

But he doesn´t know that Lisa exists.

She needs to stay with him.

Lisa thinks that a one day, Adam will come to her desk and say to her: "Lisa, I need you, I need stay with you".



Thanks for corrections.

 

When writing in the present tense in the third person (he, she, it, Lisa, Adam, etc.), make sure to put an '-s' at the end of the verb.

He runs every day.

She plays basketball.

2015年7月30日
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Lisa loves her boss:

Lisa works in the marketing departament.

Her boss is Adam, 40 years old, strong and handsome. He´s a sexy man.

But he doesn´t know that Lisa exists.

She needs to stay with him.

Lisa thinks that one day, Adam comes to her desk and tell her: "Lisa, I need you, I need to stay with you".



Thanks for corrections.

2015年7月31日
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