Nora
book shooping I bought today two english speaking books. They are thin, and I really hope, that I can easily understand them.
2015年8月27日 19:22
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book shopping

I bought two english speaking books today. They are thin, and I really hope that I can easily understand them.

 

**you do not need t use a comma after hope. Additionally, the noun today will come at the end of the sentence. Overall great job!

2015年8月27日

Book shopping
Today, I bought two English text books (today: could also be placed here). They are thin, and I really hope, that I can easily understand them.

2015年8月27日
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