Mireia
In italki again. Hello!! I'm very happy to be here again. This year i've been very busy with my job in the school and my studies. During this year, I went to english classes in a public school, but it hadn't enough to improve a lot my level of english. The classes were very easy and I couldn't learn a lot. It doesn't matter, I know that we can learn a language in ourselves if we want. Ryan, that I met him in Italki, has taught me that if we want, we can learn a lot. And it's true, because he has a very high level of Spanish. I'll try to write my stories and adventures in Italki. I want enjoy with you again. If you need something, tell me! I'll be here. Kisses!
2015年9月1日 14:32
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In italki again.

Hello!!

I'm very happy to be here again. This year i've been very busy with my job in the at school and my studies. During this year, I went /attended/took to eEnglish classes in a at public school, but it hadn't enough to improved a lot my level of e English much. The classes were very easy and I couldn't learn a lot.

It doesn't matter, I know that we can learn a language in ourselves if we want. Ryan, that whom I met him in Italki, has taught me that if we want, we can learn a lot. And it's true, because he has a very high level?? of Spanish.

I'll try to write my stories and adventures in Italki. I want to enjoy being with you again.

If you need something, tell me! I'll be here.

Kisses!

2015年9月1日

In italki again.

Hello!!

I'm very happy to be here again. This year I've been very busy with my job in the school and my studies. During this year, I went to English classes in a public school, but it hasn't been enough to improve my level of English a lot . The classes were very easy and I couldn't learn a lot.

It doesn't matter, I know that we can learn a language by ourselves if we want. Ryan, who I met on Italki, has taught me that if we want, we can learn a lot. And it's true, because he has a very high level of Spanish.

I'll try to write my stories and adventures in Italki. I want to enjoy sharing things with you again.

If you need something, tell me! I'll be here.

Kisses!

 

Hello Mireia and welcome back.

Just a few small corrections here. In your sentence about Ryan you have to use 'who' not 'that' because it is in a non-defining relative clause - you put it in commas - so it is extra information.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

2015年9月1日
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