Practice English

Hello everybody
Today I'm trying to write my entry without using any fear in italki,

Today I'm writing my entry without fear, in italki,

Today I write without fear, in italki,

because I believe that grammar you use usage needs to be evaluated after some challenges. I'm not shy/embarrassed because of my mistakes. We have a beautiful quote in Persian related with to what i mentioned.  The quote is :

"Not knowing is not shame ,shame is to don't asking.".

Not knowing is not shame, the shame is in not asking.

I'm preparing to take IELTS. This is great to speak and learn English, so please guide me with your corrections.
I am looking forward for to your answer.
Aliakbar Karamvand

Practice English

Hello everybody. 
Today I'm trying to write my entry in italki without being afraid, because I believe that the grammar you use needs to be challenging and then evaluated. I'm not shy of my mistakes. We have a beautiful quote in Persian relating to what I mentioned. The quote is: "The shame isn't not knowing, the shame is not asking". I'm preparing to take IELTS. It's great to speak and learn English. Please guide me with your corrections.
I am looking forward to your answer.