lilian lin
go fighting yesterday is th fourth day of the national day holiday, it's the last day of my holiday,but it is also a new begining ,i will try my best to do the best of my english ,keep moving ,guys!
2015年10月5日 04:32
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go fighting

Yesterday was (when refering to the past use a "was" instead of "is") the fourth day of the national day holiday. It's the last day of my holiday, but it is also a new begining. I will try my best to improve (improve means to become better) of my english. Keep moving, guys!

 

Overall, not a bad entry! Keep up the good work! Your English writing is pretty good!

2015年10月5日
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2015年10月5日
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