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Have you ever thought about a man’s soil role / position in a family? Until recently, a fundamental role for a man was to support his / the family and make as much money as possible. Even though most of women were working too, they were also responsible for taking care of the house and children – unlike to the men. Undoubtedly, it has changed over the past decades.

Firstly, modern men can cook and clean; in a nutshell they can do the housework by themselves. If in a relationship a woman earns more than a man, he can take a paternity leave. He doesn’t feel ashamed to be in charge of the household drudgery / chores. A contemporary man is aware of how hard it is to run a house, that is, how hard it is to fulfill everyday households’ needs.

Secondly, a man is the perfect exemplar / role model for his children, especially the youngest ones who ought to learn independency and to help for anothers in order to be good people in the future. He doesn’t only raise them, helps in with homeworks and everyday life, but also provides emotional support supports emotionally. A guy like this is widely respected in his family. 

Summing up, under no circumstances will I negate the significant role of a man in the XXI 21st century. Equally with women, he takes care of the family and his partner. Living with somebody is easier provided that people complement with each other and don’t split jobs up on male’s and female’s between men and women.

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