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Dream In over area people believe person who has seen a bad dream should not tell anybody else about that dreams details because it may happen !!!!!! But I myself don't think so,I just don't like to hear about bad dreams.

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In over* area people believe a person who has seen a bad dream should not tell anybody else about that dream's details because it may happen !!!!!!
But I myself don't think so,I just don't like to hear about bad dreams.
 
*Do you mean "over" or "other"? Maybe you mean "in other areas"? 

Hi! You have written a nice little entry! There are not many mistakes. Good job! As a comparison, I am going to rewrite the paragraph so that you can see how a native speaker might express the same thoughts. You'll see it's just a little different. You are correct to write it the way you did. I am only writing this in case it interests you : )


In some areas, some people believe that a person who has seen a bad dream should not tell anybody else about the details of that dream, because it may cause it to come true.
But I myself don't think that; I just don't like to hear about bad dreams. 

Thanks for your entry! Very interesting : ) I don't like to hear about bad dreams either!

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