Hoài
My mistake I'm tired of studying some difficult subjects for me such as: informatics, physics, chemistry. I'm just a girl and I'm not intelligent. I can't keep up with my classmate. My biggest mistake is specializing in INFORMATICS, specially I have to study FREE PASCAL. If I had a wish which become true, I wish that I could return time to change my decision. At that time, I would specialize in Literature.
2015年11月30日 10:29
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My mistake <em>(We might say "my regret" which means I wish I had done something differently, but I am learning from it)</em>

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I'm tired of studying some difficult subjects for me such as informatics, physics, and chemistry. I'm just a girl <em>(unless you really feel this way as a girl, you might mean "I'm just a young person" or "I'm just a teenager")</em> and I'm not intelligent. I can't keep up with my classmate. <em>(see my comment to you about your intelligence, but you might express it as an emotion like "I don't feel as intelligent as my classmates") </em>My biggest mistake (<em>regret)</em> is specializing in INFORMATICS, specially <em>especially because</em> I have to study FREE PASCAL. If I had a wish which become true, I wish that I could return time to change my decision. <em>(In USA we might say "I wish I could turn back time" or "I wish I could turn back the clock") </em>At that time, <em>Then </em>I would specialize in Literature.

2015年12月1日
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My mistake

I'm tired of studying some difficult subjects for me such as: informatics, physics, and chemistry. I'm just a girl and I'm not intelligent. I can't keep up with my classmates.

 

My biggest mistake is (or: was) specializing in INFORMATICS,

 

specially I have to study FREE PASCAL.

 

especially since I have to study FREE PASCAL.

 

or: in which I have to study FREE PASCAL.

 

If I had a wish which become true,

 

If I had a wish which would become true,


or: If I had a wish which became true,

 

or: If could have a wish that would come true, (<-- I think this one is best)

 

I would wish that I could return go back in time to change my decision. At that time,Then  I would specialize in Literature.

2015年11月30日

My mistake

I'm tired of studying some difficult subjects for me such as: informatics, physics, and chemistry. I'm just a girl and I'm not intelligent. I can't keep up with my classmates. My biggest mistake is specializing in INFORMATICS, especially because I have to study FREE PASCAL. If I had a wish that would come true, I wish that I could reverse time to change my decision. At that time, I would specialize in Literature.

2015年12月2日
Hi Hoai. I will suggest corrections because you asked. But first I want to say that you are intelligent because your English is already good. Many people envy someone who can speak a second language. I can only speak English fluently. I am learning Chinese, but it is often hard and frustrating. This is normal experience when learning complex subjects like a new language or science. Also you are young, so you have plenty of time to try new things and find what you like best. Don't give up or be too hard on yourself.
2015年12月1日
I don't think that being a girl changes anything about how smart a person can be. There is a saying in English, where "If there's a will, there's a way". If you want to do what you want to so badly, you will find a way to do it and become successful.
2015年11月30日
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