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The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web?What solution can you suggest?
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In the modern world, There is a significant increase in the use of the Internet; however, It also cause many issues in social life. A lot of people spending too much time talking online rather than meeting friends in the real world. Another reason is that, individuals use computer for keeping important data, it may not safe enough. This essay will examine the problems of taking time to wander the Internet and suggests some feasible solutions.
These day, people lose their time sitting in front of the screen, googling, playing games computer, watching a movie, needless to say, they waste much time stay inside home than go outside. This things may bring about a massive fail in relationship. Espeacially, family, which not use online communications to talk to you as your friends do. It cause more distance between you and your father and mother. In order to solve this problems, you should not neglect to talk with your family. Moreover, It is vital to use the Internat less and make a schedule for it. By doing this, Not only much time you will have with your family but also you will rise self-discipline.
Additionally, the development of the technologies make our lives more easier. It can be seen that we use it in several purposes even the important one, financials, most people use online banking that enables customers to conduct a range of financial transactions through the financial institution’s website. However, in some cases the online banking security is not strongly safe. We can see it from the news that a number of people has been stolen thier money after entering online banking. It is obvious that the basic solutions to solve it is to use it with caution. More importantly, you should avoid transferring among money on the website. It result in financial problems which is difficult to deal with.
In conclusion, the current using of the Internet has been caused several problems. As a result spending much time chatting online and transferring money through online banking, people have been confronted with relationship ans financial problems. Thus, It is necessary to immediately fix these problems by encourage the users to leave their computer, and people should pay more attention when accessing online financial system.
2017年3月10日 07:57
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Writing IELTs Task 2
The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web?What solution can you suggest?___
In the modern world, there has been a significant increase in use of the Internet; however, it has also caused many problems in people's social lives. A lot of people are spending too much time talking online rather than meeting friends in the real world. Another reason is that individuals use computers to store important data, and it may not safe enough. This essay will examine problems with wandering around the Internet and suggest some possible solutions.
These days, people lose their time sitting in front of screens googling, playing computer games, watching movies - needless to say, they waste a lot of time staying inside their homes rather than going outside. These types of behaviour may lead to massive breakdowns in relationships, especially within families, who do not use online communications to talk to you like your friends do. It creates more distance between you and your father and mother. In order to solve this problem, you should not neglect to talk with your family. Moreover, It is vital to use the Internet less and make a schedule for using it. By doing this, not only will you have more time with your family, but you will also develop greater self-discipline.
Additionally, the development of technology has made our lives easier. We can be seen that it is used for several purposes, including important ones, such as in the area of finance, where most people use online banking that enables customers to conduct a range of financial transactions through their financial institutions' websites. However, in some cases, online banking security is not strong enough to be safe. We can see this in news reports that tell us about people that have had their money stolen after they used online banking. It is obvious that the basic solutions to solve this problem is to use technology with caution. More importantly, you should avoid transferring money on a website. This may result in financial problems that are difficult to deal with.
In conclusion, the current use of the Internet has caused several problems. As a result, doing things like spending lots of time chatting online and transferring money through online banking have led to people being confronted with relationship problems and financial problems. Thus, it is necessary to immediately fix these problems by encouraging users to leave their computers, and people should also pay more attention when accessing online financial systems.
2017年8月3日
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